Above is the second draft to my magazine advert. The changes I made were to promote the album an rearrange some wording and sizing. I think like this version more - but think it is over crowded so my last and final magazine advert will not have quite so much writing. I still think the general layout of my magazine advert is effective, which is why I kept my original idea.
Well done Charlotte, yes your 2nd advert is too overcrowded - I think your first draft is more effective. Well done for endeavouring to catch up.
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